Sunday, January 20, 2013

Bonafied Beauty


 The view outside,
bonafied beauty.
Judy take note,
antidote for grief.
Relief for the taking
forsaking gloom.
 
 
 
 
(Chained Form Poetry Prompt)

12 comments:

Susan said...

I'll be happy for some of that cure! Nicely woven.

hedgewitch said...

This is quite cleverly put together. I'm very glad you decided to give it a shot and share with us.

Mama Zen said...

Really nicely done!

Mary said...

Looking at beauty can so often lift the spirits, can't it?

Manicddaily said...

Very clever and very good advice both. Well done. K.

Willow said...

Yes, we must get outside ourselves, the view outside and "antidote for grief." Beautifully written.

Fireblossom said...

Yeah...I have to take my own notes, too!

kkkkaty said...

Another short and sweet poem gets high marks!

kkkkaty said...

Another short and sweet poem gets high marks!

Grace said...

Of course it is ~ Good note and pattern too ~

aprille said...

Such very interesting inner rhymes that I wish you'd make it longer.

Tarang Sinha said...

Nice one!:)