So very true, Judy! Everything would pail before a wall of water!
Sorry - "pale" - LOL. (A 'pail' definitely would not contain the water.)
I liked your typo, Mary. As I was walking today, I was trying to compose a "rap' about the power of the ocean. Don't ask....
Glad you tried this prompt Judy. Surge and recede just seems to immediately call the ocean to mind. I like how tight this poem is--and I can well picture standing in front of that wall of water.
katrina, katrina, katrina..30 foot surge..CA
I certainly thought about Katrina and also the Tsunami as I wrote this, CA.
Wow, Judy, awesome vision and poem.
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