Poignantly beautiful, Judy.
A nice poem, Judy! Expresses your feelings very well. The ending is powerful.
Ah, the dream! I can be pretty dreamy even awake, which isn't always a good thing. May the good feeling of your dreams stay with you.
Hi Judy,Beautiful poem...I also very much wish for the dreams just before dawn..
A lovely dream always gets broken at dawn. Can definitely relate to this one!
I know how you feel... especially on a Monday morning!
I know this sentiment well
Beautifully written! (Bel commented sleepily...)
Wonderful poem! You catch so well the beauty of the dream world. I loved the phrase "pummeled and crushed by reality each morning".
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Poignantly beautiful, Judy.
A nice poem, Judy! Expresses your feelings very well. The ending is powerful.
Ah, the dream! I can be pretty dreamy even awake, which isn't always a good thing. May the good feeling of your dreams stay with you.
Hi Judy,
Beautiful poem...
I also very much wish for the dreams just before dawn..
A lovely dream always gets broken at dawn. Can definitely relate to this one!
I know how you feel... especially on a Monday morning!
I know this sentiment well
Beautifully written! (Bel commented sleepily...)
Wonderful poem! You catch so well the beauty of the dream world. I loved the phrase "pummeled and crushed by reality each morning".
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