Thursday, April 21, 2011

Second Thoughts

Corrections are made, I’ve clarified sections,
elaborated on the important segments,
but on second thought
maybe first person
singular or plural -


Kim Nelson said...

The life of a writer... second thoughts, thirds, rough drafts, back to notes, revise, revise, revise. Scrap. And again.

SweetTalkingGuy said...

Cool! when you've rewritten what you wrote what you've written will be right!


brenda w said...

I understand compeletely. Or verb tenses, or is it offensive...? or ...? Some days I second guess myself too much. I like your expolration.

Agnija said...

I so relate! Second guessing myself and tying myself up in knots-- that's me!

Mary said...

One thing about writing, one can always REDO, rethink, revise! Truth in your words.

Peggy said...

Very clever Judy. And oh so often true! I think any writer can relate to this. Is this one of your paintings? I like it.

Jingle said...

everyone has that kind of moments,

well done expression.

Happy Friday.

imnotaverse said...

Oh, I so know that feeling, that indecision!

Nicely expressed for us all :)

California Ink in Motion said...

First second thrid forth, abnd then there is the edits. How fun to see someone actually put this into poetic termm. Hve a great day!