Thursday, April 21, 2011

Second Thoughts

Corrections are made, I’ve clarified sections,
elaborated on the important segments,
but on second thought
maybe first person
singular or plural -
redo.

9 comments:

Kim Nelson said...

The life of a writer... second thoughts, thirds, rough drafts, back to notes, revise, revise, revise. Scrap. And again.

SweetTalkingGuy said...

Cool! when you've rewritten what you wrote what you've written will be right!

Nicely!

brenda w said...

I understand compeletely. Or verb tenses, or is it offensive...? or ...? Some days I second guess myself too much. I like your expolration.
~Brenda

Agnija said...

I so relate! Second guessing myself and tying myself up in knots-- that's me!

Mary said...

One thing about writing, one can always REDO, rethink, revise! Truth in your words.

Peggy said...

Very clever Judy. And oh so often true! I think any writer can relate to this. Is this one of your paintings? I like it.

Jingle said...

everyone has that kind of moments,

well done expression.

Happy Friday.

imnotaverse said...

Oh, I so know that feeling, that indecision!

Nicely expressed for us all :)

California Ink in Motion said...

First second thrid forth, abnd then there is the edits. How fun to see someone actually put this into poetic termm. Hve a great day!