I saw this on RJ's site and promised to give it a go this week. Not yet, but soon... Nice job here!
Form poems are fun sometimes. I think they help a poet expand. I will be searching out the shadorma.
I always have to look up the line thing to do a Shadorma! Great job!
Communication is the name of the game, if it helps you to express yourself, then I say let's play Shadorma!!
I am still so new to poetry, that just getting my thoughts into words has been a new experience! I have tried a couple "forms" in these four months, but haven't tried Shadorma. But will! Nice job on yours!!
I agree it is very addictive especially when I read cute ones like yours!
I just wrote some linked Lune (Lunes?), but I agree. I just discovered this form and I'm eager to it a try. You did so quite successfully, a nice melding of form and content.
Thank you for this recommendation. I think I'll try it! Sounds like fun :)
I am HOPELESS at most forms. Was into a groove for a while with lunes. This is a gorgeous shadorma.Guess I'm too scattered or just plain "old hippie" to embrace them, but I do appreciate when forms are done well, as with yours here.Peace, Amyhttp://sharplittlepencil.wordpress.com/2011/04/13/new-shrink-rap-with-johann-ink/
Love it, Judy. I believe it is Shadorma fever, I wrote one yesterday, but have not yet posted it.Pamela
ha ! Lot of amazing Shadorma on blogs today .. but this one neats them all :)
I don't usually like to do form poems, but your plug for shandorra tempts me.
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