I like this, Judy. I think it is a good idea to capture just a snippet of your day in a short poem like this. This poem lets me feel your pain. OUCH!
This small stone definitely irritates the senses, Judy.
This makes me curious about the small stone again. I think we have looked at this small stone idea before but I can't remember it well. I hope your feet feel brand new soon! Good capture of a snippet of your day.
I like this one, Judy. Short but wrapped up so beautifully! Bullying Poems
Whew, Judy, I wish you didn't have this particular snippet of your day to even consider, but you sure did a great job getting the point across so succinctly.
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judyHope you have less pain and are moving around better..been there, done that....with the same surgeryCA
This is strong Judy. I've experienced the narcotic dulling the sharp edge of pain- well described. Hope the need for dulling passes soon.
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