Tuesday, April 19, 2011

After All These Years


He looks good standing there,
intent on the gelato he has in hand.
My heart beats faster while I zoom
his body into my one-shot camera lens.

10 comments:

Victoria said...

He does look good. I find the passion and tenderness between the two of you beautiful. The zoom imagery is strong.

imnotaverse said...

What a sincere love poem. Wonderful.

Mary said...

Yes, I will agree he looks good, Judy. LOL.

Paul Andrew Russell said...

That's a lovely poem, Judy. It's great to see love like yours. :-)

sharplittlepencil said...

Judy, a picture is worth a thousand words, but your poem added so much context to this image. True love... ain't it grand? Amy
http://sharplittlepencil.wordpress.com/2011/04/20/laptopia-ode-to-starbucks-haiku/

Lynne said...

Sweet, tender, and honest love poem, Judy.

Agnija said...

Although it's cliched, I only have this to say "Awww!.."

Agnija said...

OK just clarifying that I meant *my* comment was so cliche! I loved the direct simplicity of yours. Sheesh! Can you see me second guessing myself?

Judy Roney said...

I think I wrote a poem about that second guessing! LOL It's a writer's habit. :)

Willow said...

Beautiful, wonderful love poem, Judy...just love that your heart beats faster, still.