Sunday, February 27, 2011

I WOULD

If trees were truth
I would climb them
If the mountains were glimpses
I would scale them
If the moon brought peace
I would fly there
If the sun were understanding
I would die there…

18 comments:

Mary said...

Judy, this is truly beautiful. I like each of the couplets. Wonderful thoughts.

Ella said...

Stunning, so much beauty revealed in defining truth~

Rachel Hoyt said...

I can really relate to your beautiful message! Lovely deep thoughts.

flaubert said...

Judy, I love this poem.
Beautiful sentiments.

Pamela

Danny Earl Simmons said...

The last two lines really do it for me.

girldaydreaming said...

simply beautiful!

tOuCh said...

Like this, I would tell you this was lovely but I will tell you it is simply beautiful. Like it!!

LeiffyV said...

Such great power in so few words, you grasp the feelings people have about this life and what it should be and weave a great little tapestry. Thanks for sharing and thank you so much for your visit!

Bee's Blog said...

Powerful in such few words. love it.

Victoria said...

I find this poem strong and rich with emotion - gut poem. It especially gets me the way you end it "If the sun were inspiration I would die there."

Linda H. said...

This one is full of feeling and beautiful.

83october said...

I'd probably do the exact same thing. I love the first two lines. It resonates. :)

Jingle said...

your desire for beauty is valid and elegant,
perfect piece.
A++

smiles.

verseinanutshell said...

Lovely verse!

Kim Nelson said...

If...
But look at the wonder and beauty you create because you are not. Lovely stuff, here, Judy!

beccagivens said...

Absolutely lovely ... thank you for visiting my "nook" ... and leavning a "crumb" to yours! becca

bendedspoon said...

Wow!
I love the thoughts in here! :)

fiveloaf said...

love this verse judy.. here's my potluck http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/01/25/paper-scribbles/