Judy, this is truly beautiful. I like each of the couplets. Wonderful thoughts.
Stunning, so much beauty revealed in defining truth~
I can really relate to your beautiful message! Lovely deep thoughts.
Judy, I love this poem.Beautiful sentiments.Pamela
The last two lines really do it for me.
Like this, I would tell you this was lovely but I will tell you it is simply beautiful. Like it!!
Such great power in so few words, you grasp the feelings people have about this life and what it should be and weave a great little tapestry. Thanks for sharing and thank you so much for your visit!
Powerful in such few words. love it.
I find this poem strong and rich with emotion - gut poem. It especially gets me the way you end it "If the sun were inspiration I would die there."
This one is full of feeling and beautiful.
I'd probably do the exact same thing. I love the first two lines. It resonates. :)
your desire for beauty is valid and elegant,perfect piece.A++smiles.
If...But look at the wonder and beauty you create because you are not. Lovely stuff, here, Judy!
Absolutely lovely ... thank you for visiting my "nook" ... and leavning a "crumb" to yours! becca
Wow! I love the thoughts in here! :)
love this verse judy.. here's my potluck http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/01/25/paper-scribbles/
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