Lovely poem of connection which began powerfully and has deepened and strengthened over time and through shared experiences. I remember talking back in Palm Springs about the feeling you describe in this poem the "in the shelter of the circle of his arms" feeling that you and I both find great comfort in.
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Nicely expressed feelings, Judy.
A rock for sure. I like this Judy and am always impressed when a form is used successfully.
well done and love the last line made me smile
You find the most interesting poetry forms. You inspire me to try this.
Lovely poem of connection which began powerfully and has deepened and strengthened over time and through shared experiences. I remember talking back in Palm Springs about the feeling you describe in this poem the "in the shelter of the circle of his arms" feeling that you and I both find great comfort in.
Judy, I love the emotions you expressed in so few words. Magical!
Well put. Concise. Strong. Deeply felt.
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