Saturday, June 4, 2011

Coffee House


Coffee scent of hazelnuts
Crunch into bagel thin
Chatter encapsulates space
Clatter of work produced
Write in this comradarie
Experience and strangers

7 comments:

Mary said...

This is good, Judy. I can 'smell and taste' this poem. Different environments don't usually work as well for me. I am so distracted, but I am glad it is good for you.

Victoria said...

Good sensory images Judy. I'm glad you got out and got writing. I think I'll try the different environments thing from time to time. It has both been helpful for me and not in the past.

Poets United said...

As Poets United reaches its first anniversary this coming week we want to thank you for your support. Over the past year we have grown to 250 members plus and are steadily growing. Poets United is proud to have you as one of our members and look forward to another successful year. You imagination, creativity and willingness to share with us is what makes our community such a wonderful place. Thank you for beautiful poetry and thank you for being a part of Poets United.

Lynne said...

I haven't had my coffee or bagel yet. Yummmm. This speaks to me. Makes me want to go to coffee houses more often. BTW, this is from Ann on Lynne's computer.

Judy Roney said...

What a nice note from Poets United. I love that!

Judy Roney said...

Ann, I thought you LIVED in coffee houses..my bad. :) I know you live for coffee. Maybe that's where I got mixed up. LOL

Peggy said...

What a lovely capture of time in the coffee shop! Good sensory images well chosen.