the image of cat swollen dry in the dessert is very primal for me - and yes, please don't break my bones either.
Wonderfully, shockingly visual. Yes, "please, don't break my bones."
Strong images in this poem, Judy!
This sounds like a prayer, Judy, a mantra we all express in countless ways at this time in life.
Oh my, Judy! Your description is perfect. I experienced a near fall the other day and yes, we do grasp at air as if..... Stay safe, friend.
Fantastic images in this falling poem, Judy. You really caught the feeling of falling.
I'm with Victoria on the cat swollen in the desert... strong writing, Judy, thanks so much. Amyhttp://sharplittlepencil.wordpress.com/2011/04/26/aging-disgracefully-and-proud-of-it/
Can't break titanium .
Funny Bill, it's all those joints that AREN'T titanium that I worry about now. LOL
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the image of cat swollen dry in the dessert is very primal for me - and yes, please don't break my bones either.
Wonderfully, shockingly visual. Yes, "please, don't break my bones."
Strong images in this poem, Judy!
This sounds like a prayer, Judy, a mantra we all express in countless ways at this time in life.
Oh my, Judy! Your description is perfect. I experienced a near fall the other day and yes, we do grasp at air as if..... Stay safe, friend.
Fantastic images in this falling poem, Judy. You really caught the feeling of falling.
I'm with Victoria on the cat swollen in the desert... strong writing, Judy, thanks so much. Amy
http://sharplittlepencil.wordpress.com/2011/04/26/aging-disgracefully-and-proud-of-it/
Can't break titanium .
Funny Bill, it's all those joints that AREN'T titanium that I worry about now. LOL
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